We love #43. Can you make the roots a little thinner as they come out of the N? That area feels a little heavy. Great design. We like how powerful it feels.
Ok-on 61 can you make the letter I not broken, so not lower case with the dot at the top? And try having the roots turn sooner after they come off the I? So they are slightly closer to the word and there isn't such a long piece extending before they turn right and left? I hope that's clear!
And same with #60, can you make the roots not come off the letters so far before they start to turn? Samd maybe smooth it out so they come off the full area of the bottom of the right side of the N? And a tiny bit thicker. I think the thin roots loose a little of that strength. Like in between the first one and this one I'm terms of thickness.thank you!!
On #63 the spacing between the roots and the word is perfect. Can you have the longest root that shoots to the left be st]lightly more curved? It feels just a little too much like a crack. And the first small root that come off that root maybe make it angle up and to the right a little more, so it isn't going so straight down? Hope that's clear. we love this.
#65 looks great! Can you try just shrinking the bottom left root (the main one with the two smaller shoots) a little tiny bit, so the whole thing is slightly smaller and goes less far to the left and the shortest shoot goes less far toward the bottom? Just want to see if that looks better, It might not. Love this.
Hi. You are going to be the winner. We just need to show the group that this logo isn't as aggressive as it looks. Can you make the roots slightly less mean? Like have the angles be more curved? I personally love it the way it is but this is a group decision. I am sorry to ask you after the contest ended. I am talking about the logo ranked #1.
We are back and forth between the two. Can you make one that's right in between? So not as many white broken spaces as #68, but slightly thinner roots than 67, and a few more white broken spaces.