Thanks for submitting an entry. I like #9 and how RPP stands out. I also like the spacing,cleanliness and font. However, can you please try putting the RPP above Roosevelt Plaza and playing around with the font style and layout of the RPP? Would love to the RPP to be iconic enough to stand on its own, without the full park name, if needed. Would it be possible for you to create a logo or play around with the font so that the RPP depicts Camden city hall? Can you add some edgy or art deco elements maybe? It is a little too clean. Also play around with some of the colors and fullness of the text? Not sure if possible, but I could send you some other images of the park concepts if that will help conceptualize the theme of the park.
Let me know if you have questions. Thanks very much. Look forward to seeing the edits.
please check my newly added entries #83 and #84 with more realistic Camden City Hall building please feel free to ask if you need to see other changes/revisions :)