Hello, Thank you for your entry. I like the design but here are a few changes.... 1. The green shape has a bit of a "hook" on the right side of the logo that could be modified. 2. Also, our mountain view is that of Mt. Shasta or Mt. Lassen and it would be nice if you are going to put a mountain in there, to make it more to those shapes. 3. I like the type treatment, but am not sure that the two dashes on either side of the word "Church" do much besides fill space.
Hello, We are narrowing it down to #46 and #121. Here are the changes I would like to see: 1. Can you please reverse the mountain scape so that hills are on the left and Mt. Shasta is on the right. 2. Can you please fill in the "sun" so there is not outline, but rather a solid sun? 3. Can you please do a black and white version? 4. We would like to see RIVER and COMMUNITY the same size. Could you please do a version like that?
Enzyme, Here are our most recent comments/changes: 1. Concerning 110- we like the mountains in this logo the best but would like to change the river so that it is similar to 146 but widened in the right hand corner so that it is coming at us and pulls us into the logo. We would also like to see the sun filled in and a cross subtlety added into the design.
2. Also, I would like to see all kronur revisions in black and white if possible,
Enzyme....thank you for your quick response! I don't think I was very clear about what we need. With 149, please remove the bottom of the circle completely as you did in 147. Then please widen the river about 2 or 3 times than what it is now on the bottom right corner, so that it looks like it is coming at the viewer. Also, could please use the font style from 146 but the colors from 149? And do a version with the name to the right of the logo as In 137 and a version with the name at the bottom of the logo as on 146? Please fill in the sun as in 123, but add a cross in the spot where there is a glow and make it slightly glow like the glow spot in 123. The cross should be subtle, but readable. Let me know if you need more clarification. Thank you!
Enzyme, Thank you for the updates. We still have more changes: 1. Widen the river on the right side so as to draw the viewer into the logo. I have created a sketch on a google drive and will share it with you if you send me an email address. 2. Once the river is enlarged, please show it without a cross as shown in the sketch. 3. With the new river, please also show us a version with the arch instead of a full solid sun as you drew in 101 with a cross and without a cross. 4. Once you have changed the river, please apply the same font treatment as you did in 146 but with the same colors as you have right now in 151. 5. Also, can we please see these in black and white also?
Hi, as LT rules we are not allowed exchange email when contest is not completed hope you understand. Can you save as jpeg and upload the image here http://tinypic.com/ and share me the link so i can see it. Thanks
Enzyme, Thank you for your hard work on the logos. I am sure this will frustrate you, but we are still not satisfied with our choices. We are looking for: 1. something simpler-we want to see some designs without the river, sun and mountains. 2. an emblem that will stand on it's own 3. something with more depth and meaning to communicate a Christian church/community 4. something that will work in one color
Please think in a different direction and submit any ideas that you have. I know time is getting short!
Enzyme---#145 is my personal favorite! Wonderful job. I am waiting input from the rest of my team, but I really like it. Thank you. If you could make one minor change....RIVER and CHURCH should be in the same font size, weight and color. COMMUNITY can be a lighter weight...this is so the reader sees RIVER and CHURCH first with equal impact.
Hi Enzyme, I think we are getting close. Thank you for all your hard work. On # 178 and #180-we need to work out the color. I wondered if you could show these as monochromatic, using an blue-green. We feel like the colors might be distracting us from being able to see the cross more readily. Also, could you please do a version of these with the top line on the green and gray figures that extends all the way to the same length as the bottom line of the top figures? And could you give a little more space between the words (RiverCommunityChurch) so the names are not so much on top of each other?
On #170, we would like to see the lines extended a little further on the bottom and straighten them so that they form a straighter cross at the bottom and the top of the image instead of having the "serif" at the bottom and top. Also, please try one where the color would remain the same except the dots--each of the dots would be a different color.
Hi Enzyme, We will go with 186 with just a few minor changes: 1. Can you weight the word "church" as same as the word "river" and take the gradation out of the words...just leave it the blue that you have in the word "river"? 2. Can we see it in black and white? 3. Can you do a variation with the same center cross colors, but change the dot colors like in #184? Thank you!
Enzyme, Keep 186 (with the type treatment). I like it and that is my final decision. The only other thing I want you to change is to add the colored dots as in 190, but please switch out the gray dot to a warm color (something in the red family).
Great. I like #195, but the red is too intense and stronger than all the other colors. Can you please make it a little more orange, and maybe the top right one a little more yellow? So that all the dots looked balanced? Or maybe try another color?