Rites of Passage TravelLogo Design Contest

Thank you for your entry! I love this design. This is right on with what I was going for.

Entry #1: Business Builder: I've looked at this entry at least 50 times today! I really like it. could you please add some muted colors to the clothing on the couple? Maybe a muted yellow, or even muted color stripes. Also, I would like to see the bag colored in. Thank you.

colorize and modify the people a bit - thanks for feedback - hope this keeps high scores through the contest. Happy to try other versions based on your feedback.

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Good morning,
Thanks for the update. I'm not sure I like the colored in people, it takes away from the background. I like the chartruese color of the woman's sweater, but think the colors are too bold for the watercolor effect I'd like. If you can come up with some very muted colors to add to the clothing I might like it better. Would like to see the bag in a very light camel color. The free style font of "Rites of Passage Travel" is a great concept, I would like to keep the same idea but make the font a little more elegant and feminine. The background colors are spot on and I like the font colors. Thanks again.

Business Builders: I love the effect of the couple who seem to be gliding through their perfect vacation.

hope you like this better. AND I hope this design is still your favorite once there are more entries! (we like to win and to be ranked high!)

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sorry didn't see your comments sooner - we get an email if you put it in the individual feedback area so that will help. Happy to make changes - hope you like this coloration better and the different font.

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I'm sorry, I didn't realize I was posting the comment incorrectly. Is this the individual feedback area? I don't want to frustrate you and slow down your work.

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I like the updated bag and color
still would like to see more muted colors on the people and the clothes not entirely colored in.
the background is fantastic.

no problem - got this by email this time...
I will work on the colors on the people and try some other techniques to get the hand painted look you requested.

Carol

worked on colors a bit more to make more watercolor like. And another font option to consider

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can you please change the bag color to the same red as in entry #2?

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can you update the shoes to a stylish heel? thanks.

hope you like this better.

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my girl is more the collegiate/career type vs the other one who is the fashionista! it is just our style differences!

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Please separate the word "travel" from Rites of Passage to give travel more emphasis. Could you please capitalize each of the beginning letters from the tag line?

can do either illustration style - colors can also be adjusted.

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This comment references the winning selection (entry #18). I am traveling at the moment and would still like to make a few subtle changes to this logo. can you make changes after this Thursday? Thank you for your submissions.