It's hard to say what i dislike but I don't think this is quite it...
After reviewing your portfolio again here is a list of some that I like: SACOMPANY Rocon Technology KMRM Consulting, LLC AirlinersGallery.com Pure Spa and Fitness Save 1 Heart, LLC
If you haven't had the chance please read the public forum i have been compialiing a list of notes of thought thus far.
I love that these are outside the box and different from everyone else - however i want you to keep in mind what we anticipate using this logo for.
We will use this logo for our: - website banner - media advertisements - apparel - Staff clothing - Sponsorship branding
I need the logo to communicate what we are and what we do. And when we use this logo as branding it alone can convey that.
Also we wanted to give the designers the creative freedom to add a 'Slogan/Tag-line' if they wish. We do not have one now and would love to see your ideas.
If you haven't already done so please read the 'Read Me' post on the public forum i think it might help give you some additional insight. If you have already read it I have recently updated it with more information.
I would love to see another idea... please let me know if I need to be more helpful.
I have updated the public forum with this message:
1st thing that we wanted to say was 'WOW!!’ -all the submission thus far have been amazing - we really appreciate everyone’s attention to detail and taking the time to read through our comments.
I have extended the contest for another 7 days and wanted to use this time to ask that all new submissions be completely outside of the box - moving away from the utilization of a 'Rhino' in the design strategy. We will still consider designs with 'Rhino' features in them however we want to see your design ideas for logos of a company representing the following:
Again please don't take this extension of the contest as a reflection that we are dissatisfied with any of the submitted design work thus far. Again we are looking for new design ideas that represent the above criteria.