Hi, Reni. The extra definition on the tree trunk is nice. However, I think that the building currently looks like it's sinking into the water a bit too much. Could we expose more of the building, either by moving it up, or moving/removing some of the water?
The sky in the back is a nice touch, but I also think it's a little too much for a logo for when it gets printed in, say, black and white.
Hi! Could you make the mill building in the middle bigger so it overlaps the tree/fills up more of the white space above it? tree would lay on top of building in terms of order.
Hi, Reni. This one's quite nice! The inside here feels slightly too "big city" for Watertown, though. Could you perhaps feature some smaller buildings or a different focal point? We've attached some photos for reference.
You might also want to take a look at the "Washington Tower," which is a local landmark that might work well with your design in place of the buildings.
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The sky in the back is a nice touch, but I also think it's a little too much for a logo for when it gets printed in, say, black and white.
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You might also want to take a look at the "Washington Tower," which is a local landmark that might work well with your design in place of the buildings.