Resilient WatertownLogo Design Contest

Hello dear Kim,

Hope your day is going well.

Yes sure i can, please check my revisions and let me know if it´s all okay.

If you need anything more feel confortable to ask as always.

Thank you.

Kindly Regards,
João

This is good- would you be able to maybe simplify or make more narrow the house on the right-hand side, and enlargen the trees and bicyclist so they take up more horizontal space? As it is now they seem a little shrunken compared to the buildings.

I´m glad you like it Kim, it´s a clean design.

Yes sure i can, please check revisions bellow for your appreciation and let me know if it´s all ok:
- #203 , #204

If you would like to see anything else just let me know, feel free Kim.

Thank you.

Kindly regards,
João

We like this one- could make a version that has a house shape on the far right side of the design?

Please consider this one #202 instead of #199 Kim.

Thank you.

Kindly Regards,
João

Hello again dear Kim,

Thank you for your great feedback.

Please check revisions for your appreciation and let me know your thoughts:
- #199
- #198 - with windows
- #200 - with a classic building added

If you need anything else feel confortable to ask Kim.

Thank you.

Kindly Regards,
João

Hi, as we move towards a final design, we had some ideas that you could try incorporating into a few new versions.
-simplifying the bicyclist to better match the line drawing style of the rest of the design and making him a bit smaller in scale
-incorporating a building outline that evokes a classic house with a pitched roof
-adding outlines of windows to one or more of the building shapes (Watertown has a lot of older industrial buildings with large panels of windows- look up the Arsenal for reference)
-removing the color gradient from the green box behind where it says "Watertown"- just make the whole box the darker shade of green

Hello again Kim,

I´ve submited black & white versions of the logo, plus other variations so you can see how the logo goes on color backgrounds:
- #189 | #190 - black & white
- #192 | #193 | #191 - other variations

As always feel free to ask if you need anything else.

Thank you.

Kindly Regards,
João

Hello dear Kim,

Thanks for the quick updates.

Yes sure i can. Submited already.

If you need anything more feel confortable to ask please.

Thank you.

Kindly Regards,
Joao

Can you add the tagline at the bottom, below the green strip that says "Watertown"

Hello Kim,

Welcome back again to LT : )

Hope all is well with you. Yes sure i can, please check my revision and let me know what do you think:
- #166

Feel confortable to ask if you need anything more. Your feedback is welcome.

Thank you.

Kindly Regards,
João

Could you make the linework slightly thinner and add more detail to the trees? (though Still in outline form- I like the graphic simplicity of this)