I've uploaded several variations of the script-feel approach. I wanted to keep it authentic, yet evoke a sense of curiosity and grace. Each submission helps to capture the viewer's eye, and draw them into the grace present in the logomark.
If you have any ideas or further revisions in mind, please let me know. I'm happy to hear your thoughts and take your suggestions. I'll work with any ideas you give me.
Thanks! And I appreciate the feedback and the new rank. I'll be able to upload a revision when I get home from work later today; just checking my messages now. Have a great afternoon! -Jennifer
Hello! My apologies for not uploading the revision as soon as I wanted to. I'm currently working on getting the signature close to Salvador Dali's as possible. And that takes a little time to get it just right. So know that you are my top priority today, and I'll upload the revision as soon as I get it done (ASAP).
There it is -- my take on Dali's signature, incorporated into your new logo design. Hopefully, this is what you were going for. If there are any further adjustments you need, feel free to let me know. Have a great afternoon!
I uploaded my recent revision just before you re-ranked recently. Did you happen to miss it? If not, please let me know why it's not ranked higher; the current logo is not as close to Dali's signature as mine is. And well...if I can say this with the utmost respect...the current top-ranked entry is not readable. In fact, that top-ranked one and the similar one by the same user here (ranked 3rd) is also not readable.
I can say with absolute certainty mine is readable, though.
I hope whatever design you choose, you run it by several people before you make your final decision. And that making sure whatever logo you choose is readable to everyone without someone having to tell the viewer verbally that it's supposed to say "Rene"...