Rendezvous & the HookupsLogo Design Contest

No problem!
Thanks for letting me know.

I'm going to play with the rankings so I can make surveys. Don't think I've given up on you.

Thank you!

This might be the one. I wonder what it would look like if that middle line were red - inside the arrow.

I'll forward this over and see what my girl says.

Thanks!
Rhonda

Sure thing, I'll get to work on it right away...

and also (sorry) maybe we could make the R bigger - like a drop cap. ???

I actually just had another thought about getting & the Hookups out of the way of the Z. You could do it like
& the
Hookups

And just make the arrow bigger, keeping the words to the right of the z loop.

Maybe???

And when you make that color change, maybe we can make & the Hookups the pink that you already have?

Thanks!
Rhonda

Thanks!
Okay - I like how you changed the vertical lines behind Rendezvous. Perfect.

And I'm not feeling the purple, so how about you just change everything that's purple to the same blue that you have on the arrow. Since it's the middle line, I think it will still be okay.

I don't quite like the z dropping down between the and hookups, so let's either move "& the Hookups" to the right side of the z - shift things however, make it look nice -- longer arrow -- whatever it takes OR maybe change Rendezvous to a font that doesn't have that kind of z. If it can't be script maybe something else that's round like that. Whatever you think.

Thanks!
Rhonda

Here is another font options for "& the hookups"

Here is the latest design based on your last feedback.
Please let me know what you think.
Thanks,
Don

Hi Rhonda,
No problem, I will get to work on these changes asap.
Thanks,
Don
PS - Thank your singer as well :)

If you can, I'd like to see a new take on this. Can we make the colors bolder (darker) and replace the green with something else (idk purple? orange? just not green)?

Also, maybe arrange the elements so that the bottom of the vertical lines do not extend below the Re. Whether that means bringing the word Rendezvous down or raising the vertical lines higher . . . ? Either way. It might also need to be wider. If you bring that z down closer to & the hookups, and it obscures the arrow -- those words may need to slide to the right??

I'm not sure.

My singer likes your logo the best right now, but doesn't like green. Please let me know if we can show her something else.

Thanks!
Rhonda

Thanks Rhonda, I understand where you're coming from.
I'll see if I can come up with something more
what you are looking for.

Don

Just to give you an update. Your sign has the best shape and flow of anything I've received. However some of the other fonts - and the way the words are put together are incredible. The words really look like neon. I would give you better feedback, but I am not design-enough to explain the difference I'm seeing. If I were to say it in music, I'd say that yours looks a little more 50s Rock and Roll and theirs are coming in as more 1920s Jazz or Disco. I guess I'd have to say that yours is more "innocent" and the others are more sexy. Yours is definitely cute, but it's just not holding up in comparison.

(Sorry)

I didn't want you to think I'd forgotten about you.

Thanks for all of your patience and hard work.

Rhonda

Thanks!

Let's try taking out the "Another One Night Stand and it's outline." It's not important and it is making this busy. We can also pull out the music notes. If you think Rendezvous would work slightly bigger, then go for it. Otherwise, we can see how it looks as it is.

Thanks so much for your patience.

I like this a lot. A LOT.

No problem at all, I will submit revised designs when I get back to my design computer in a few hours...

Could I see this without the oval?
And then maybe center Another One Night Stand under & the Hookups? The slogan might need a box of some kind around it to make it feel like a vacancy sign under the arrow.

I like having a border gor the sign, but something that follows the shape of thr words would be better. If that's not possible, it's not a problem.

Thanks for all of the feedback, I will work on a different background shape when I get back to my design computer later on today.
Thanks again,
Don

Ultimately too, instead of the oval - could you make the shape more irregular? I definitely like how you just have the line though -- no background color on that part. Like a neon sign at night.

The letters here on & the Hookups almost seem to glow. That's very cool too.

I really appreciate it.

I also like how with the lowercase letters it makes the z not hang into the second line so much.

But I like the solid yellow you did below.

I like the multi-colored arrow here, and the darker pink on Another One Night Stand.

We are really getting somewhere. This looks great.

Yes!

Thanks Rhonda,
You are not pestering at all, it's all part of the process of coming up
with the best logo for you. I will work on revisions asap.
Don

This really is close.

I'm sorry to keep pestering you. If you can, please see the last image I just now uploaded. Notice how the lines go around (like neon) but there's not really a background? Also, I'd like the arrow to have a hook. Otherwise, you are extremely close to what I have in mind.

I'd also like to see what & the Hookups looks like in mixed case (not all caps).

THANKS SO MUCH!
Rhonda

Yes! The yellow looks great.

I also like the slant.

You are good listener!

I guess too, I would have Rendezvous be solid - not two color. Like neon piping.

Don,

This is a great start. I like the script for Rendezvous and you definitely have the retro feel that I am hoping for.

You're on the right track.

I just uploaded two additional images. I think my Radiator Springs picture is taking people away from my vision. I'm really hoping to see a neon sign - where you would see black behind the words. For instance in your picture, the blue/green part would be gone. The words would be the art.

Please see my new pics and let me know if that helps.

Hello & welcome to Logo Tournament!
Here is my first entry for your review.
Any feedback is welcome & appreciated.
Thanks,
Don