We love that you used a camera in the logo. The word photography gets a little lost for us and we think we'd like the camera all one color. But we like where you are going with this logo!!
We like the camera on the left side of the logo, but like the single color of the camera better. The only thing we don't like about the camera itself is the swirl on the lens and we were wondering if the flourishes you drew on the first camera body could be brought back by making them a lighter color than the camera body? We'd like to be able to see the word photography on the bottom possible a bigger, bolder or different font so it's more readable, but also balanced.
Great work and we really like your design. Thanks so much for everything!