Hi there, find my first entry attached. I've flowed some thought bubbles off the dot in the i to lead to the wheel of the truck. Used a classic 1950's automotive font style to give the feel you were looking for. I'm currently working on some variations of this design and will upload these later. Please let me know if you'd like any changes. Thanks. BMF
I like the attempt at the thought bubbles but until I read you post I just thought that black dot was some kind of mistake. So as you make you variations I would think that unless it's clear that it is a thought bubble maybe remove it.
Hi there, thanks for the feedback. I've re-worked the design to make it more obvious it's thought bubbles. Let me know if you'd like any changes. Thanks. BMF