Red SaidLogo Design Contest

Hi,
Here's my first entry for your logo. Please let me know if there is anything you wish changed. I'd be happy to make any revisions you might want. Thanks!
Pam

(This comment references Entry #17)

Thank you, Rapunzel/Pam. This is very fun and captures a lot of Red's energy. Love the bubble, too.
Red is wondering if you could make some small changes:

*take off the musical notes
*tone down the toothy smile a bit
*try a simpler font

Again, many thanks.

Hi,
Thanks so much for the feedback! I'll make the requested changes and upload the revised design for your review. :)
Pam

Hi,
Here's the revision of my first entry. I deleted the musical notes, lessened the smile quite a bit, and changed the font. Please let me know if there is ANYTHING you wish adjusted. If the smile is still too toothy, I can revise again. Thanks for the feedback!
Pam

(This comment references Entry #20)