I think the person here looks too feminine and it has to be very very clear that this is indoor rowing from the rendering- so there needs to be a handle and a chain coming off the handle. They cannot think that this is on the water rowing.
Hi thanks for the fast feedback! I really appreciate it here you go change the person in a more masculine and put a handle in chain in abstract hope you like this version :)
Yes better- I think too much detail on the machine- take away the seat part and you can just show the chain and the flywheel and people will know that it is on an ergometer. I don't want to have to look at it to figure out what the guy is doing.
Take a look at the photos i uploaded- the flywheel of the machine (the round part) is on the same plane as the athlete's - it is not below as you have drawn. The chain from the handle to the flywheel is parallel to the floor not as you have drawn.
yes number 32 is correct- the other ones are not. Look at the drawing that I posted- it's a blue background- if you can add a little more detail maybe the seat/bar under him?
My husband said he coudn't tell what he was looking at when he looked at the logo- did not feel that the athlete and the machine were identifiable enough. Can you modify it so that it is a little more clear?
The other theme we really like - is the one I suggested of the hands, handle and chain only- very toned forearms, but drawn in almost an abstract way- like the black and white rower logo that I uploaded - can you do one like that too to see how you would do it. The forearms and hand grip really demonstrate toughness and "grit" which we like... want to see how you would interpret that.
That's better- can you take the thumb off the bottom of the handle- the hands/fingers just hook over the top- you don't actually have your hands wrapped fully around it.
Marveen- did you see the drawings that I posted of other ideas that I like- not sure the hands are getting the message across... look at the photos I uploaded.
We like 86 - it's a lot of black- can you tone down the black somehow and maybe put "ready set" in smaller font so that it is just over the chain so it doesn't blur into the handle? And can you make the person a bit more artsy and not so literal? It is clearly a male and am hoping for it to a bit more androgynous. See the rendering I had uploaded that was a white and black rower to see the style I am looking for.