Hey! Thank you for the edits, could we try:
-The Town Hall looks great, so much better. Overall, could we try simplifying the windows and details of the building, so we have less very small shapes?
-Could we push the Town Hall down a bit? The middle structure (circled) is supposed to be doors, so they can't be floating.
-Could we make the "Ready & Resilient" text slightly bigger so it's closer to the edges of the box?
Could we try a version where we flip everything and the town hall is on the left? The current angle cuts the town hall's center out and leaves the rest of it. If you put it on the left, maybe you could do the pieces you have, and a little bit more of the building so its more recognizable. I'll try and draw the outline of what I mean.
Can we make the building look more like the Town Hall? Maybe shift it so we can see some of the base of the building, right now it just looks like two towers.
Can we overall try and make the style less cartoon-y and pixel-y, maybe thinner lines and softer shapes.
Please make the "For" uppercase in the tagline
ALTERNATES:
Can we test out two other versions as well?
1. A version where "Ready & Resilient" sits on top of the picture?
2. A version where we add a sandy coastline below the greenery?
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-The Town Hall looks great, so much better. Overall, could we try simplifying the windows and details of the building, so we have less very small shapes?
-Could we push the Town Hall down a bit? The middle structure (circled) is supposed to be doors, so they can't be floating.
-Could we make the "Ready & Resilient" text slightly bigger so it's closer to the edges of the box?
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Could we try a version where the building is flush with the bottom of the square and there is no sand?
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Could we try a version where we flip everything and the town hall is on the left? The current angle cuts the town hall's center out and leaves the rest of it. If you put it on the left, maybe you could do the pieces you have, and a little bit more of the building so its more recognizable. I'll try and draw the outline of what I mean.
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Can we make the building look more like the Town Hall? Maybe shift it so we can see some of the base of the building, right now it just looks like two towers.
Can we overall try and make the style less cartoon-y and pixel-y, maybe thinner lines and softer shapes.
Please make the "For" uppercase in the tagline
ALTERNATES:
Can we test out two other versions as well?
1. A version where "Ready & Resilient" sits on top of the picture?
2. A version where we add a sandy coastline below the greenery?
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