#25 I like the concept of this but it may be a bit too close to Josh's layout. Can you try to do 3 circles one living room - one office - one kitchen.... above the text. The simple illustration style is good but hard to tell what it is... make it a bit cleaner make it a bit more colorful too. maybe pick up the oranges from his web site.
Try a different font also. Ray's in a clean bold script and House Cleaning Service in a san serif.
Sounds like I am complaining too much but it does have potential...