Just to clarify I would like to see the whole thing in blue in upper and lower case as well and also try the raw in just blue and leave the tech in gray as it is. Like I said, try these combos in upper and lower case please.
Hi, Can you please make the slogan more legible on #7 please. I think it need to be a little bigger as when printing it might not show up that well. Thank you.
I still like the design, but can you try and come up with a pictorial or abstract mark either to the left or right is the text. I would like to see what you can do.
Here's the design again with darker slogan. I used a diff font. Smoother and easier to read. Just wanted if you like it. If not, I'll use the previous one again.