so the first entry i saw of this "series" was
#11 and my first reaction was "wow i f***ing love this!"
Raven is hard to read for those that dont know it says Raven. Yes I can read it and i love the type, but i got feedback that it was hard to read.
i cant tell whats going on on
#19 - is that supposed to be a beak below the writing? if so im not sure it translates well.
#28 is too busy.
i keep going back to
#11. can you try to make the type more legible while still keeping it rough looking? and is there a way to get more of the bird/beak into the eyes logo? then it wouldn't look as "no fear" i don't think. these are just my first thoughts that im laying out so feel free to share your opinion or ask more questions!