#8: Love the background of the circle! Need to remove the year and change to "Peachland, BC". Add in "3.1km & 7km" somewhere. Snake looks a little scary! Can it be toned down a bit?
Hi Ryo, Can you make the following changes to #8: - add the green island in background same as # 22 but make it a brown island - change the mouth color in #8 snake to brown with red tongue. There is too much red in mouth - change "Rattlesnake" font colour to white/grey gradient - change rattle on snake so it is at 45 degrees and change to light brown colors - remove "Peachland, BC" and move "3.1km & 7km" in it's place. use same font as "Peachland, BC" - add black background to "Rattlesnake Island Swim" same as #22
Hi - getting there, some changes - Snake should be green like #8 - snake rattle should be light brown - change snake tail so it's behind the snake like #8 - looks like the snake is missing some of it's body. can you extend the snake body to the left so it looks like it's coiled more - remove the clouds from the background - remove the outer grey rays - can we try the island in darker grey with lighter grey highlights. the dark brown color does not work - make the snake larger so it is protruding past the circle like in #8
Latest changes in #43 look good just two edits: the snake rattle in #43 should be brown it is currently white and the tail should be green to match snake
#46 the rattle should be raised up a bit and made a lighter brown. See the light beige in the bottom of the snake in #22, and make the island a darker grey