Hi Here's my entry. The outlines of the hourse and rider are supposed to be silver. with a black inside. same for the writing. I can imagine it being embroided in that colour. If you would like to see it in other colours let me know. I know there's not long left but I'll do my best to re-arrange if you wanted to see differend colours.
Obviously the inside doesnt have to be black either, I've made it so the inner can be whichever colour the teams apparel is. With the silver embroidery for the logo. The main can also be made this way.
Ok I'm done, I can show you them in the 3 colours black white and maroon. Font can be changed if you like. This is just for you to get an idea of how it would look.
Ok, I've moved the text down slightly so the effect of the horse jumping over is still the same. Ive made the text longer to. And Larger however now it overhangs the end of the horses nose. Does it look ok to you? Do you need anymore adjustments?
I think this is more along the lines of what we're looking for text is narrower but Bolder. Let me know what you think, I do like this it really stands out. It would on clothing and banners.
Ive printed it out, Ive this time used the proper pantone colour for maroon. Ive also just made the horse 1 stroke thicker the mane is the same. It does stand out alot more Ive just printed it out again. I've also compared it to my swimming clubs badge on my hoodie, Theyre roughly the same size, apart from my swimming club has alot more text. Let me know what you think?
This one isnt as thick, but the lines are cleaner,I noticed that the bottom 2 hooves on the thicker one seem to dissappear into a silver blob. This one is thicker still clean. I've also made the text bigger on the top. Hopefuly that helps.