I absolutely love the concept. Is there a way we can probably blend like a blue and green color together and make it bolder. Can you work in the image of your concept in front of a rainfall or body of water with mountains of some sort. However, still keeping it very simple like you have already. - Wife speaking!!!
FYI, I loved the label origanally but I was recently informed that what we were aiming for was too busy. If we can simplify it, it will bring your position back up. This will be on a label of a plastic bottle for retail. I love what you have started. Please keep the ideas coming! Thanks Design!