I like the relative weight of the text-- with "Rainmaking" being more visible and "for" being less visible.
Also like the relative size of the icon relative to the text.
The image is too literal in in how it shows something related to rain. it looks like water coming out of a shower head.
Given that rainmaking is a metaphor for helping a business grow, and make money and get more clients, an image that was more financial or might work. This is also for a consulting firm, so something that would convey power and trust would be appropriate.
As for the color, I would like something a bit more colorful; fewer earth tones. The company is based in Los Angeles, California and we are used to seeing brighter colors.
Thank you for taking the time to submit a design. Hope this is helpful, and I look forward to your future designs.