Hi Nong,
Thank you for your entries.
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#2: I like the overall feel apart from the sharp angles of the tick in the middle of the blue ripples.
A drop might work better if it isn't too cliched...I would leave that to your judgement. I like the colour used in 'Rainmaker Perpetual', I also like the fact that it is easy to read.
I do feel you could make the feel even more exclusive and perhaps a fraction more serious.
Entry # 3: Same comment regarding the colour and font. I like the colour of the motif but not the design.
the sharp strikes don't give the feeling I'm looking for.
Let me know if you have any questions.
Best regards,
Franklin