Good morning and happy holidays (merry Christmas if you celebrate).
Thanks for your continued efforts. In your designs, it will come down to either simple pain elegance or a bit more detail. So we’re keeping #111 (with slight revisions) and the more detailed #113.
For #111, the only specific change at this point for your works is possibly smoothing the creek under the cabin (ie the white line that curves back in the larger mountain from left to right above the words ‘quiet creek’ ). Please leave the shape as is, we love it. But can you look at the line and make sure it’s smooth… could be not reproducing well in the thumbnail but appears to have a few jumps/breaks in the curve?? Again this could just be due to the reduction in the image, and if so, no changes are needed.
The only other change to #111 is for the shape of the windows. I will be posting a general comment to everyone on this, basically the next time anyone makes a revision to please consider changing window shapes where possible if the design has 2 or 4 square window panes to two triangular window panes (that match the roof line) as in our google plus photo, see link below. If there is only one square window pane, please insert one triangle to match the roof line.
Here’s that URL
https://plus.google.com/+QuietCreek/photos For #113, same comments about window shape, that will be general soon.
Also for #113, we like the two trees (balances and symmetry with 2 mountains) But the line son the trees are still too harsh. Can we soften them, make more curves say similar to the tops of the mountains, more bowed in (down) to match the style? You can also do one large tree instead, up to your artistic direction. The only thing holding this design back is the trees don’t match the elegance of the mountains.
Thanks and keep up the great work