Quizas. Thanks so much for your work here. I like the energy that your images have captured. We have a split in our team between your work and one other, so please can I ask you to work with us to close the gap in your favour?
There's alot going on in the logo as currently presented. Does it get simpler with the removal of the grey road? I.m preferring the white mountain version with the red outline as it is subtler. If we removed the grey, perhaps softened or eliminated the motion stripes what happens then?
There's possibly some consideration on the font. When putmebackon is spoken, the emphasis falls on PUT and ON. Maybe it gets too chequered if the emphasised words are the same colour? I'm interested to see whether you got it bang on with that italic font, or whether a squarer and less italic font.... looking for the right word... professionalises it more. For sure this is about fun on the bike so its not corporate boring, so you may be right, but I'd like a look at it alternatively.
Yes, of course, in a few hours I will make these variations you propose.
At this stage of the competition, only the designer on first position can upload design revisions.. I don't have the upload button now
Please, Can you please put me in first position provisionally? so I can send the revisions proposed. Later you can change the rank if you change your mind.
Kind regards from Barcelona and sorry for my english, Oscar
Hi, I send you some variations. In some of them I've changed the pose to a posture more climbing #29 #30 #31 and #32 (personally, I think is better this posture). And in some I've added a slight road line. Please, don't hesitate to ask for any other variation or combination (font, pose, line road, etc) you need. Best, Oscar