Many thanks for the revisions. Much prefer the location of the tag line in #333 than in #332, and it's nice how it's slightly curved, but the font used doesn't match the rest of the logo... too fussy. I know it's been stated that we are looking for character for the tag line but in this instance, simpler is better. Perhaps a font with a handwritten feel?
per your request i tried some different fonts and am loading three different samples. There were a couple of more delicate ones that were nice, but I know when printing some packaging ink dot gain on a reverse out can be a little problematical, so i shied away from those. Anyway, this is option 1