Thanks for the submissions. We do like the idea if having the name inside a frame and like the font you've used for the strap line. The font for "Purebread" might be misread as "PureGread".
Thank you very much for your feedback. I send you different fonts with the bread color. If you prefer the green or the blue, of course I can change them. Thank you
Thanks for the revisions. Our most preferred fonts are #113 and #115. We like elements from this idea (the idea of a frame around the name, the font for Delectably Different, the simplicity) but there are a few things which don't work with our vision. We'd prefer a white background around the text, so that the text is blocked with colour and not the other way around. We are also looking for an element of excitement, perhaps the frame could be made exciting somehow? We're getting a lot of submissions with leaves in them, and whilst some of them are very effective, leaves lack excitement. It's also very important that the logo seems balanced, so the tag line needs to be centred.
Thanks for the updates! I've just posted some new pointers for everyone at the very bottom of the comments section on the main contest page - take a look!
Thank you for your latest designs, I'm so pleased to see some wings! Such a great concept and adds the extra character we're looking for. I saw this idea used a lot for the "Power of Allyson" contest and thought it would work well for Purebread. Whilst the overall idea is great, we are still searching for a trustworthy-looking logo - an element that the choice of font in the current 1st place conveys perfectly. Think simplicity... no need for graduated colour in the text, or a font which looks like it's been outined, just let the wings add the drama!
As I said before, this is a great concept, but the overall style is wrong. The choice of font doesn't work with the wings. Wings are delicate and yet the font for Purebread is very chunky which doesn't work together. I'm not saying we need a swirly or elaborate font (it must be easily readable), just something a lot less blunt!