Please don't use an archer like LightStorm. It's too similar. I was only using that as an example of a very clean and creative logo of a hero which included a way to incorporate the name into the picture (lighting bolt representing Light and Storm and showing a hero)
I think a camera shutter might work better in the middle, but I don' think the swoosh elect is working, as it's destroying the stem on the "P"
You are very talented. I'd be interested in seeing what you could come up with more on the Protagonist / heroic front. Maybe set this design to the side while focusing on that.
Would it work better if it was the profile of the left hand (showing the side with the thumb facing right), used as the entire inner portion of the exterior blue "P" ?
Could a fist (like the one Superman uses when flying, but more line art style), be integrated into the inside of the "P" instead? The arrow doesn't work for me.
I like the color better than the black and white version, but colors are an easy change. Might be better on white, but could play on both.
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I really like this. It's interesting and clean. It follows the mandate regarding the polygon but doesn't take into account the protagonist, or "heroic" aspect. I'm not sure that can be incorporated into this.
Would it be too busy to have a simple outline of a heroic posed figure in the middle? How do we get the "protagonist" element to play?
I really like this. It's interesting and clean. It follows the mandate regarding the polygon but doesn't take into account the protagonist, or "heroic" aspect. I'm not sure that can be incorporated into this. How can they coexist?
This is interesting and clean, which I like. It follows the mandate regarding the polygon but doesn't take into account the protagonist, or heroic element. I'm not sure that can be incorporated into this.
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I"ll try to combined the two ideas
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I have to go to sleep now but will look again tomorrow.
You're very talented. I hope you keep going with this and maybe even try something new. You take direction very well.
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Want to try something different now, something with a more heroic element to it?
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Also, see some of my new notes on ideas and fists and heroes in the main section.
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You are very talented. I'd be interested in seeing what you could come up with more on the Protagonist / heroic front. Maybe set this design to the side while focusing on that.
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Otherwise, same notes as the other version:
I really like this. It's interesting and clean. It follows the mandate regarding the polygon but doesn't take into account the protagonist, or "heroic" aspect. I'm not sure that can be incorporated into this.
Would it be too busy to have a simple outline of a heroic posed figure in the middle? How do we get the "protagonist" element to play?
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Don't be afraid to try something fun.