We are going to be presenting #19 as the winner, but it just quite isn't there for us right now. Can you work with us on the logo. I like the general look and the feel. I like the colors (I could go another way there, but I like the colors you have used). The big issue is while I can see the P I cannot really see the T. Can you make the T a bit more pronounced? If not I think I would rather have it be a creative and cool P than a P and T. However my first choice would be to see the P and T.
Ok, I think I see what I need. How about something in between the top 2. My suggestion would be that the top line goes further over than in #1 and a bit bolder showing it's a T, but it doesn't swoosh around like you have it. So it looks more like a straight lign that another curve at the end.
Can you also try an effect with a little less nike swoosh look?
yeah but if i change the curve of the lines, P will not be as visible, it's not like nike has copyright on a curved line, only if it's too close to what they have as a whole. i will do it with a little less "swoosh" but it will not look very good.