Ah! Very subtle on my machine, but I see that now. I like the maroon. Could I ask for one other color variation to #16/17? I'd like to see the red/maroon (primal) in teal, and the teal (perspectives) in a green with a blue undertone. Something a bit quieter, but with the pop of the maroon/teal. Thank you very much!
Would it ruin it if we did the leaf and the swoop on #58 in maroon? I really like the softness of #58, but the swoop doesn't stand out, and that's what I really like with #17 & 54. I'm so visual - I can't tell if that would improve it or not. What do you think?
First, could the 'Returning to Our Roots' be moved down a little, say by 5 points?
Second, could I see a different font for the 'Returning to Our Roots' -- while I love the font, several people say that the font is hard to read, and another is concerned that for one possible application I might use, the hole in the 'e' in 'Returning' might not print. Is there another font that is very similar that would take care of these two issues?
Please let me know if you have any questions on these requests. I appreciate your time and fine work!
And, I've not decided on the color of the apple leaf over the 'i' -- I definitely prefer the green, but the red swoop leads the eye downward. The red leaf is is a bit much, but keeps the eye going left to right.