We appreciate the creativity of this entry. We were wondering about different colors. Red is good for fire. Green might suggest more of a tree. But green and red are Christmas colors. Might there be other sorts of combinations? Could the human figure be slightly more distinct but preserve the tree image? We would also like the size of the words "Hope and healing for all" to be somewhat increased.
We very much like this "burning bush" entry! Can the words "hope and healing for all" be set off somehow? Perhaps they could be larger, be in the reddish orange color, and in a different font (italics or cursive). We also wonder if the darker color could be even more of "hunter green'? Finally, could the human figure be a little more obvious? For instance, we were wondering what it would look like if the head were more oval than round? Could there be a torso somehow while still preserving the trunk of the tree?
Thank you for the wonderful variations you have provided. We prefer #61 best. One last adjustment we would like to see is if the words "Hope and healing for all" could be the same size font as "Presbyterian." We want the words to stand out just a little more than they do. Can there be a little more space between the words as well? We understand spacing may mean we cannot have the side lines, but we would like to preserve if there is room. Thank you for working with us!
We really like #67. Our only concern is that the words "Hope and healing for all" run together and are hard to read. Could there be less space between the letters within the words and more space between each of the words? Can everything else remain constant? THANK YOU for working with us on these final details.
dear sir, this is the revisions - #73 space between text increased, removed text kerning on tagline text - #74 space between text increased, removed text kerning on tagline text and increase "presbyterian" size. - #75 space between text increased, removed the text kering on all text and increase "presbyterian" size.