Here is the revised design, same design just bumping up the blue and following prior comments about a metallic feel the the logo. Any additional comments would be great! Thanks, Pat
Suggestions: Lose the stitching around the lettering. Also lose the red stroke around all the text and bold up the already existing blue and make it a darker shade. Also lose the drop shadow haze (doesn't add anything. The red of the football you should make deeper.
Here is another direction, took a look at the kusi website and took some elements and feel from it with this new direction, Thanks and comments on this one would be great!, Pat
Pat I think you were a lot closer with your first attempt and I actually suggested it to the powers that be. If you give a shield backing to your earlier submission and perhaps add some color to the lettering that might be the push toward yours.
I like it. we need to lose the metal text. The metal background plate make the stars stand out and lose the reflection on it. Also try to incorporate our station logo. The link is posted in the main area of the contest. For your reference and the reason your's isn't in first place is that the station manager really likes the PPR treatment that rob larkin did. I like your layout better, easier to read and your choice of font is great but the PPR treatment needs to be addressed.
Hey thanks for the comments, But I think this as close as I can get to your direction before someone takes me to logo court. So Hoping this one will be the one you guys were talking about. Any concerns or comments, just let me know. Also thanks for leaning towards my direction, Hoping this one would of worked out for both of us. Take care and good luck, Pat
Pat, some last comments. we really like your second rank submission. Can you straighten out the top of the shield so that there are no dips in it and where the stars are add our logo vertically. Also if you could make the text more aggressive... a logo to look at is the "Professional Bull Riders" Logo (just type it into google).
And if you could take that same backplate design and use just PPR with those aggressive letters and put prep pigskin report smaller underneath... that might do it.
Here ya go, Thanks for the final comments, Hoping this is what you were talking about, Giving it to you both ways as you asked for, anything else, just let me know. Hope were getting close! =-) Take care and good luck with this one, Pat