Hi! These are some interesting designs, yet they are very far from what we are looking for. Like what was mentioned in the project brief, we are looking for a symbol along with our logo. The text is almost secondary. Not to sound repetitive, but think of the NIKE logo: the swoosh. That one symbol culminates sportswear and when people see it, they know it is NIKE, even if they don't write the words "NIKE" next to it. These designs you sent in are all reliant to make their point, and the attention grabbing changes you made in blue are not interesting enough to stand on their own. We would like to see more stand alone graphics and then have the text tie in to the symbol/graphic.
Hi! These are some interesting designs, yet they are very far from what we are looking for. Like what was mentioned in the project brief, we are looking for a symbol along with our logo. The text is almost secondary. Not to sound repetitive, but think of the NIKE logo: the swoosh. That one symbol culminates sportswear and when people see it, they know it is NIKE, even if they don't write the words "NIKE" next to it. These designs you sent in are all reliant to make their point, and the attention grabbing changes you made in blue are not interesting enough to stand on their own. We would like to see more stand alone graphics and then have the text tie in to the symbol/graphic.
Thank you for your further submissions! Unfortunately, neither of them are what we are looking for. Thank you for adding graphics, however. #31 is rather abstract, and although it resembles a "P". the resemblance is not all that striking and at first sight, it does not seem to resemble anything. Entry #32 looks like a shutter on a camera. Although I like the idea of the "P", it does not correlate to our business. Please submit more work, and try to keep it somewhat relevant to education and learning! Thank you! :D
I love the logo you just recently submitted with the globe! It is currently our favorite! So, in the final 5 process, we would like to see what this logo looks like in some different colors. Namely, black, red, green, orange, purple, grey, yellow/gold. Also, we would like to see some different text styles! Please submit some more examples of different fonts. We are looking for something sleek and elegant, yet professional and firm. Thanks!
Congratulations on receiving two of your designs in our top 5! For this logo, entry #127, at first glance, it looks like a really cool letter P. But as you look at it more, it starts to resemble a backwards 4. I like that you allow the P to expand outside of the bounds of the logo, but I would also like to see what you could do in making the correlation to our business more presentable and obvious. Thank you!!
I love these revisions!!! I think the one I'd like to see most is the black color (entry 157) with the same lettering of the green logo (entry 164). 157's text is a little too close together. 164 is essentially the same but much more spaced out and uniform! If you could just make it look like 164 but black, that would be awesome! Thanks! (I don't know if 164 is smaller than 157, but I still do like the size of 157). Thank you!!!