Thank you for the entries. I like these. #198 especially. Simple, clear with one shifting gesture that forces the reading of two syllables. #196 is also good. I like the fonts of all but #195.
I can't really point to anything to improve. The designs are complete versions of these concepts. I will put them into the mix for our group to review and will welcome any additional approached that may come to you.
thanks David. I think this is a good selection within this vein. It just comes down to whether we take the minimal text direction. As you can see from submissions, we've been exploring the chaos/clarity mix. this is more clarity/inflection. Also good.
Thank you for the submissions. I like the angled box and so did others, but I think we are heading in the direction of the positive/negative against a graphic element direction based on our last review. If you want to take a stab at another concept please do. We like your stuff.