Hello, Evil...you don't mind if I just call you "Evil" do you? : )
Thank you for your entries and for obviously taking the time to review our notes and references.
I like the fully segmented body of #12, I also like the activity – however, the pose is too exaggerated. Try the pose not so extended instead put more of a natural bend at each knee (more like running fast, less like a ballerina). Also the torso should be more upright (posture). I like the handle of “.com” in #12
I like that #15 is incorporating the look of bodyzone.com logo by incorporating arches. I wonder if this could be less exact a translation as it adds another color and element that is bordering on messy. I’d also like to see if purple could be incorporated in a different way, maybe a little less prominent. I wonder what it would look like if the figure was behind the word and somehow the arches are tied in?
His back arm should be a bit more extended away from his body, and his forward foot angled up a little.
Hello again and thanks for your work on this. I really like #31. I like the way you incorporated the arch without copying it exactly. I wonder if you have an idea for using this setup, but a different handle for the ".com" either above or below "PostureZone". You will probably have to play with the positioning of the arch when you move the ".com"
Also, could you show me a couple options with the colors. This logo will end up on the current www.posturezone.com. I am concerned that this much purple may not look right on the website. We did want to incorporate a little purple to make it tie together with www.BodyZone.com - but are open.
1) On white background 2) Coloration found in #31; including the purple ".com", but leaving the ".com" placement above "PostureZone" 3) Remove the italics on the font 4) Can you add some dimension to the font? More depth...a shine possibly? 5) Please make the mannikin (figure) smaller by about 25%, but leaving its hand above the "P" and having the swoosh coming from the hand (as it is now)...we love that part! 6) Please change the coloration of the mannikin to be closer to the original wood tones found on PostureZone.com. The orange/yellow coloration makes it more difficult to discern that it is a mannikin. 7) If that mannikin has a nose, please remove it...we see a small "bump" on the turned face...just want to make sure that is removed. Thanks so much!
Thank you so much for the revisions...they are EXACTLY as we asked!
One more time, and then I think we're set:
1) We would like to see the “.com” below the word 2) The shine as implemented now obscures a couple of letters. I s there a way to minimize the wash-out of the letters or make the shine "point" straight across?
One final mod...can you make the back arm a little more natural. If a person were taking that stride, that back arm probably would not be so far back, and the elbow would be bent a bit more. Does that make sense?