We like the placement of the sun and your use of multiple colors of the sun and logo especially in
#9 and
#11. The positive sign/cross is looking a little to medical for us. Can you rethink some of them without the use of the positive sign? #10 is interesting. It took us a moment to see the kids. Maybe try incorporating the kids and the sun in a different way. Overall we really like your brightness and ideas, just try some without the positive sign! Thank you for your many submissions!