This is really nice. Can you remove or heavily cut the tail on the left-hand side of the "M" in "Mua" and move the two words a little closer together. Can you then make the font just a little bit thicker? Also, please could you try some alternate colour combinations using colour swatches 1 and 4 from the Design Brief PDF I included. So you could play with the orange and the green and the strong pink and yellow. You could also try using the swatch colours in the background and inverting them. I would like you to play with this a little. Finally, could you maybe make the slogan a little thicker so it is clearer to the reader? You could perhaps try a different font for this. Many thanks.
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