These do look really cool. I think they're just a little subdued. It's got a little bit of an 80's vibe, maybe you can twist it a little further that way?
#16 is def going the right way. Can we make the guy have whitish/gray hair and not balding? Also can we synch up the colors so there aren't so many for printing? Use the purple for grape on the sandwich instead of the green and do something else with the blue in the center of the circle? Keep it to 3 colors? Purples, yellows and character color? And black. Guess that's 4?
#20 is VERY cool. Can we drop the beard and give him eyeglasses? Also, the drink is a shaved ice product, can the logo reflect that? And could we swing "Poppy's" down to the bottom to make it a little bigger and more focal? Nice job!
We're really loving #29. Can we make the Nutbutter and Ice Jam part bigger yet, make it really stand out so folks know our products? To look at the graphic (which is great) lets you know we have sandwiches and drinks but the signage has to say why we stand out, what kind of sandwiches and drinks do we offer. Thanks!
Loving them #32 rocks. Can we just try the old time carnival barkers hat (with the red stripe). What is the lack of color on his hands and the outer left of the sandwich, is that for effect?
I love how you made him bigger and above the background!