Thanks. This is perfect. i am happy that your daughters approve. The product works and i have patents -- now I need to get it commercialized so that I can quit my day job!
Would it be possible to get the 1) vector file, 2) a file that has separate layers for confetti, cork/bottle, and text, as well as 3) black and white?
Thanks!
Yes, Barcelona is a great city...for the turist :)
I send you these two versions #73 with all the confetti at one orange and #74 with the curls with a little different orange( maybe I prefer this last version, but not sure)
Yes, is allowed, only once the contest is over. I will send you my mail address for any problem or doubt about the logo and for future works.
I have taught your product to my daughters and they liked it a lot, I think it's a great idea for to liven up the parties :)
I think this is the last iteration. Colors look great and it also looks good black and white. 1) Can we make all the confetti a single shade of orange? The piece of confetti that falls over the 'a' is good. Any other recommendations? I am very happy!
Hi,
Sorry for the delay in responde, was night here (in Barcelona). I have to leave home about 4-5 hours now, as fast as I can I will send you these changes you proposed. I also think that the confetti need to be more larger and fewer units.
What do you think about my proposal? I will be selling this to wineries, so I want them to think fun but that their sparkling wine (and brand) will be protected by a functional cork as well.
Ok these look good. The feedback I got from my team is that we are almost there but a bit simpler. 1) the shape of the confetti plume is good, but can it be fewer, sparser, larger pieces? 2) can we try two colors? blue for the bottle and cork, orange for the confetti? Hope to convey trust in the cork/wine with fun in the confetti. 3) to make the black font stand out against the bottle, perhaps the white outline of the 'P' could be slightly fatter. Thanks, and I appreciate your work! I'd like to send you some samples when we finish up.
I send you this revised version. Also send a greyscale versión #70 (I think that looks great this grey version)
Please, don't hesitate to ask for any other improvement
In our logo, I think it makes sense to have a small gap (half the distance of a letter) between confetti and cork so that you can distinguish the cork if the logo is small, and a bigger gap from the cork (distance of 1-2 letters). Sorry to be so picky. Thanks, Andy
this looks good, thanks! A few thoughts on it. 1) can the bottle be faded a bit so that if I print in black and white it won't obscure the 'P'? 2) Can the cork be further right, ahead and clear of the confetti? Maybe it could be over the 'o' or final 'p' at the same trajectory you currently have. 3) Can the confetti be a bit further from the bottle and the plume direction reversed?
Also, on the confetti, it does not go back down into the bottle, because the bottle is still releasing carbonated air. Finally, I think we want to have just three colors in the logo... black font, green bottle, and confetti could be either all one color (blue??) Or a mix of two colors.
Hey, this logo is my top ranked after getting feedback from some folks. Thanks! And I like how the bottle is behind the P, linking text and image. few minor thoughts.. 1) can we use the green bottle and green bottle's shape from your other logo. 2) replace bubbles with 100% confetti, such as the moving strands in your green bottle logo but also some more confetti strips... 3) on the confetti for the product, it actually shoots out the cork, not the bottle. The confetti stream is tighter near the cork, then it widens a bit further below the cork.
Thanks to you.
You know, don't hesitate to ask for any variation you would to proof.
Personally I think that the logo is more integrated whit the text now...is more compact and solid.
This is pretty sweet! Wondering if the bottle can be slightly above the first "P" so that it doesn't overlap the "P". Also, can we try confetti instead of bubbles? Thanks! You are one of my faves.
Thanks for the feedback,
I send you this revised version. Now is a little late here, tomorrow morning I will send you the confetti version.
Best,
Oscar
It's super creative. while I like how the first 'o' looks like arms shooting the cork from the bottle, people might think the name is Puppatop instead of Poppatop. That's why I suggested separating the bottle and letter.
This looks great and I like the reminder of sodastream! You are one of my top 2 here.. I'm wondering if the following could be done:
1. move the cork to about 2x the distance above the letters, towards the end of the word. Consider making it a bit larger, unless it looks weird. 2. make the first 'o' a complete 'o' with the bottle above the word. 3. make each bubble a little bigger and perhaps a few more. 4. as an alternative, instead of bubbles, confetti.
This is a fun logo. I like the flat, modern font. And the colors. Shooting the cork from the O is creative, but can the cork shoot out a bottle instead? And can the bubbles be in the wake of the cork? An alternative is to replace the bubbles with confetti. Thanks!
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Would it be possible to get the 1) vector file, 2) a file that has separate layers for confetti, cork/bottle, and text, as well as 3) black and white?
Yes, Barcelona is a great city...for the turist :)
I send you these two versions #73 with all the confetti at one orange and #74 with the curls with a little different orange( maybe I prefer this last version, but not sure)
Yes, is allowed, only once the contest is over. I will send you my mail address for any problem or doubt about the logo and for future works.
I have taught your product to my daughters and they liked it a lot, I think it's a great idea for to liven up the parties :)
I send you this version. I think that the blue color of the bottle and cork has been a good idea.
Please, let me know your comments.
Best,
Oscar
Sorry for the delay in responde, was night here (in Barcelona). I have to leave home about 4-5 hours now, as fast as I can I will send you these changes you proposed. I also think that the confetti need to be more larger and fewer units.
All the best,
Oscar
I send you this revised version. Also send a greyscale versión #70 (I think that looks great this grey version)
Please, don't hesitate to ask for any other improvement
Best,
Oscar
Please, don't worry about the changes, I really appreciate the clients who take their logo with love and dedication :)
I send you two options (more and less confetti).
Please, don't hesitate to ask for any other proof you need.
Best,
Oscar
Yes, in a few hours I will send you this variations you propose for you to revise.
Best,
Oscar
Have a good weekend,
Oscar
You know, don't hesitate to ask for any variation you would to proof.
Personally I think that the logo is more integrated whit the text now...is more compact and solid.
I send this version with the bottle more integrated with the text, and at the same time the cork/confetti is given more importance .
Please, let me know your comments and don't hesitate to ask for any variation you need.
Best,
Oscar
I send you this version with confetti and a little more "explosive"
Best,
Oscar
I send you this revised version. Now is a little late here, tomorrow morning I will send you the confetti version.
Best,
Oscar
This looks great and I like the reminder of sodastream! You are one of my top 2 here.. I'm wondering if the following could be done:
1. move the cork to about 2x the distance above the letters, towards the end of the word. Consider making it a bit larger, unless it looks weird. 2. make the first 'o' a complete 'o' with the bottle above the word. 3. make each bubble a little bigger and perhaps a few more. 4. as an alternative, instead of bubbles, confetti.
I send you this variation based in your feedback.
Please, don't hesitate to ask for any other proof you need.
Best,
Oscar
Kind regards from Barcelona.