Pop Golf MagazineLogo Design Contest

I like the concept on entry 18, but we don't like the font that much, it looks old. on the entry 20, we cannot see what´s inside the "o"? and we will preferred to be with out perspective since it will be on big letters on the cover of each issue.

Also I post some general coments, if you could take a look at them.

Thank you for the feedback!
Re #20: it is a golf hole inside the "o"

could you try with out "magazine" in the logo, I think is to much.

also, could you make it a little less thick

sure.

ON entry 94, could you change the letter "f" for something like "f" on entry 96, and also try the circles on the "P" and "G" to be hollow.

Also, could you try the slogan "enjoy life + play hard" under word Golf. on entry 125 and entry 86

#132, could you put again the full circle but with the F as it is.

Entry #133, could you change the color on either Pop or golf, leaving one of them in White..