I'll be happy to know your comments about my #23, #25, #26, #27 logo concepts. My #23, #25 logos have an abstract heart shaped collar and my #26, #27 logos a butterfly made of collars! The butterfly concept symbolizes the transformation that a collar can make at your clothes in a colorful and joyful way.
I really like #59! Can we try to do this logo but give it a little more edge? It's very cutesy which like a lot but I'm a little worried it may be a little too cute and alienate the fashion folks who steer away from "cute". The website will look similar to www.freepeople.com white background, high quality photos, simple but with an edge. Thanks so much for your hard work on this!
Thanks for your feedback. I visited www.freepeople.com to get a feel of what your website will look like. Some thoughts are that maybe the logo should stay at one color (black..?) and the woman's head should look more like a sketch... I'll work on that and see which direction looks the best.
Please check my new #67, #68, #69, #70, #71 drafts. Some of them have an artistic style and some a clean cut look without any face details. Hope you like them!
I got very positive feed back from my study group regarding logo #59 however, the feedback was that the pop looks like it says pap vs pop. Without changing the aesthic could you somehow fix that so that pop looks more like pop and not pap? Thanks a ton!
In my new drafts, #143, #144, #145, I placed letter 'a' in different positions in order to solve this problem. Please tell me which one you like the best.
Hi Pink, we are getting close! Any chance you can give the girl in the "o" shorter bangs. I really like the design of #59 best but I am still worried that the "O" looks like an "a" which causes the focus groups to read it as "pap" versus "pop". Thank you.
one more comment design 133 looks more like pop rather than pap because the font gives more space between each letter. However, when you look at the logo from the iphone the l's in collar look very close together which makes it look like colar. Can we see what that logo looks like with less bold?
Sorry, I thought that the 'pap' problem was because of the 'a' position not the girl's head. I'll try to fix her bangs in my #145 as well as #133 (with thiner font).
I uploaded some new drafts #146, #147, #149. As you'll notice I changed girl's bangs, more rounded, I think that now is OK. Also in #146 I made the type font more thin. I'll wait for your comments.
focusing in on #147 I'm not sure I'm liking the new bangs...Sorry...I like the style of the bangs you had for #59. Can we keep them the same style and shorten them just a bit to make the O more defined? Maybe add a little more spacing for pop so it does not read as pap. Could I also see a logo like you did for 59 but moving the a like you did for 145? Thanks so much!
In my new #150, #151, #152, #153 drafts I've shortened the bangs a bit and added some more space in pop. Also, in #151 and #153 I flipped the bangs, to see if you like it better this way.