PollenLogo Design Contest

Very nice work. Can you create Entry 40 with a lower case p, please?

On entry 45, can you find something else as the icon on the upper text line? Can't really figure out what it is.

Hi :)

Glad you like my designs.

I´m at work right now. When i arrive home i will submit revisions based on your comments above. And some variations of the design.

Anything more you may need just say please.

Thanks,
João

Oh, missed please on my second comment. Sorry about that.

Hello again,

Please check my new submissions.

Let me know what do you think please. You´re suggestions are welcome. : )

Thanks,
João

Wow, you turn out a lot of great work! We really like your creativity. We have been playing with 79 and wonder if we could see some different colors, still in earth tones, but something that would blend closer to the amber tones of honey.

Also, let's try the drip of 77 in place of the upper small icon on 45, please.

Thanks.

You´re welcome. : )

Revisions: #97 | #96

I´m at work. When i arrive home at night i will do a better study on colour and will submit more variations for #79. Anything more you may need just say please

Thanks.
João

Hi : )

I´ve didn´t done revisions to this one #79 since is on non intereste right?!

Submited new ideias.
#121 - with a ellegant swoosh thinking on the future of your logo since you say on the brief "We will provide local and INTERNATIONAL honey varieties" Also #116 with some lines of honey, giving the international feel.

Since the retail location is on texas i done some reference in the logos #115. Can you give me the name of the small town west of Austin, Textas please? I wanted to try something with it.

#117 - "Queen bee honey"

Let me know what do you think please.

Thanks,
João

You're amazing. Thanks for all of your work. A few thoughts, please:
136 - while we like your creativity on this, we are concerned that it may get lost. We intend to print on a clear label on top of amber honey. In some cases, like lotions, lip balm and soaps, we will be printing on paper labels. So, we would like to know how you could take this same concept and address that concern. We also would like to see it with a normal E, perhaps in the red you used on 160 and black on pure natural honey. Note that we have changed the wording on the tag to pure natural honey.

We are still attached to 40. However, we want to remove the leaf and see Pollen in the red used in 150. Then, also on 40, but a separate instance, will you put the honey jar and dipper in place of the O. We really like that icon.

Nice work and thank you.

Thank you so much. Very glad you like my designs. I´m loving designing for your brand.

I´m not really at home right now. Here is 6 pm. At 1 am i will be at home and will review all this for you based on your comments above ok?

About the label on #136. What do you mean about it may get lost? If you are saying about visibility. This logo will have, because it is high quality logo, and will have contrast, or soft contrast in a clear label. And you can resize it any size you want. I recommend you to print on offset because it will have more texture do you see: http://akulakreative.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/12/digital-vs-offset-printing-3.jpg. I think its better for your business. If you like a more clean look, go to digital.

I will leave you some links to read about this:
http://www.pinscreative.com/articles/digital_vs_offset.htm
http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-QnIi0N7nviE/UZHfUt-D92I/AAAAAAAADfA/iAtkCSvG84I/s1600/WEB-2118.JPG

Thanks,
João

What do you think about a set up like this -

pollen
pure natural
honey

We want to see honey a little bigger.

Any ideas on a bee? We don't like them to be cute, want a more modern take. Getting feedback we may need a bee. Still not sold on having one.

Hi again : )

Done revisions based on your comments.

I like this set up of slogan:
pollen
pure natural
honey

If well structure it could work well.

About the new set up on slogan, i´ve done tests on this design:
1 - #216 (honey is bigger - but i think this not work because looses elegance)
2 - #217 ("honey" with kerning between the letters, and smaller - work weel)
3 - #218 ("honey" a little smaller than "pure natural" - for me is the best one)

#208 - In the slogan "honey" is more bold.

Tell me what you think please about all revisions. Your suggestions are welcome.

About the bee: #219 - P as body of the bee. And done other variations: #220 | #221 | #222.

In my last message i´ve send you a wrong link:
"I recommend you to print on offset because it will have more texture do you see: http://akulakreative.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/12/digital-vs-offset-printing-3.jpg" now is fixed

Thanks,
João

http://akulakreative.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/12/digital-vs-offset-printing-3.jpg - sorry it´s this one

Hi : )

Done some revisions. And submit a new ideia with icons.

I will sleep now. Tomorrow after work, i will study more about your business, if i have new ideias i will submit.

Feel free to give suggestions if need. Your feedback is always welcome.

Thanks,
João

Hi João,

We want to restate how impressed we are with your continued creativity, which makes it harder for us, but is exactly what we need. So, to narrow this down, we would like to see the following, please:
Design of 242 with font of 208, in upper and lower P and no star
Multiple color options (red, blue, black, green and the color used on 241)
Let's take the word honey and put it below, a little larger below pure natural words

Thank you,

Milton and Liza

Hi guys : )

Thanks for the compliment. Very glad you are liking my designs.

I´m at work rigth now. But when i arrive home by night i will do these revisions based on your comments for your appreciation.

Thanks again,
João

Hi again :)

Revisions
1st normal tag line "Pure Natural Honey":
#250 | #251 | #252 | #253 | #254 | #255 | #256 | #257 | #258 | #259 | #260 | #261

2nd
"Pure Natural"
"Honey" (bigger):
#262 | #263 | #264 | #265 | #266 | #267 | #268 | #269 | #270 | #271 | #272 | #273

Let me know what do you think. Anything you may need please let me know. In some minutes i will sleep but i will be back tomorrow and can work on changes if needed. Feel free : )

Thanks,
João

Hi João

I think we are really close. Just a couple more proofs and we should be able to make a decision. On 262 and 263, will you take Honey down a bit, putting some separation, please? Also, on the same 2 entries, let's remove the honey jar and see what that looks like.

Thank you!

Another thought. Could you find a font a little more straight and modern for #271 and enlarge the word honey a little bit more?
Thanks!

Hello guys : )

Done Revisions:
Pictural Mark (same lettering)
1st "letter P" - #274 | #275 | #276 | #277 | #278 | #279 | #280 | #281 | #282 | #283
2nd "letter p"- #284 | #285 | #286 | #287 | #288 | #289 | #290 | #291 | #292 | #293

Wordmark (same lettering)
3rd "letter p" - #294 | #295 | #296 | #297 | #298 | #299 | #300 | #301 | #302
4th "letter P" - #303 | #304 | #305 | #306 | #307 | #308 | #309 | #310 | #311 | #312

Pictural Mark - (Other fonts)
5th - #313 | #314 | #315 | #316 | #317 | #318 | #319 | #320

Please review and let me know what do you think Milton and Liza. Anything more you may need just say please. Feel free please.

Probably tomorrow i will be a little off, not sure. Just wanted to let you know. But Sunday i will be here again by night and can work more if needed.

Wish you a great weekend.

Thanks,
João