good job on my comments, but I think the "dots" are still a bit thin. If you think of television, its hard to find a network out there with thin letters like that. Can you thicken them up? Again, nice job.
I was talking about thickening up the word "dots", is that what you thickened up? I cant tell. Also, I'm not so sure about the "tv" in the O, is there anywhere else to put it?
I like the larger font in proportion to the size of the dots. Your more recent versions have a slightly smaller font size, I like the size of the earlier ones better.