Playflight HoneyLogo Design Contest

Hi,
Here's my first idea for your logo. The bee is carrying honey in a bowl made of leaves - the leaves representing natural.
Let me know if you'd like any revisions. Thanks!
Pam

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a single leaf instead of a bowl

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#35: Hi, great job and #35 is definitely the kind of shape we want. It's a very cute bee, but we're concerned it might seem a little too cartoonish and not convey the more high end image we're aiming for.

Hi,
Thanks so much for the feedback and the ranking. I'll revise the bee to look more sophisticated, and resubmit for your review. : )
Pam

a revision of #35. Revised the bee and tweaked the design overall.

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Revised the bee a bit more, and replaced the leaf 'bowl' with a single leaf.

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We really like #44. Could it be revised to be a little less "busy"? There is a lot going on in it, and we'd be interested in something maybe a tiny bit simpler. We still like the comb in the background, and we like this bee. Also maybe without the other smaller bees. Thanks!

Sure, no problem! I can make it simpler. Thanks so much for the feedback and the ranking. I'll revise the design accordingly.

Pam

Hi,
Here's one revision of #44. I removed all the extra little bees, condensed the height of the dashed flightpath, and reduced the height of the logo overall. Let me know if you'd like anything tweaked on this entry. I'd be happy to make any changes you might want. Thanks!
Pam

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Same as entry #50, except, to make it even simpler, I eliminated the middle orange rule in the border.

The next 3 entries are also without the middle orange rule, but I can add it back in if you prefer that look.

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another variation - moved things around a bit, so as to enlarge the word 'HONEY'.

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another variation

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and another. Let me know if you'd like any revisions to any of these.

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#51: probably our favorite so far. Any chance you could actually reinsert a couple of small bees in there, but without their wings extended (so that they don't look like birds when silhouetted)? Thanks!

Hi,
Yes I can put a couple of small bees in. I'll do that right away and resubmit. Thanks!
Pam

Smaller bees added back in

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#71: We like this one - could you do something a little "flatter" - we want to convey quality and high end. It's an "artisan" product, produced in small batches. We like the general shape and elements, but we want it maybe less glossy. Thanks!

Sure - I can do that. I'll revise #71 and resubmit a 'flatter' version.

Thanks for the feedback!

Pam

Hi,
Here's the revised, flatter version of #71. So as not to spam your contest with unlimited variations of a flatter version, I removed all gradients for a starting point. Everything is now flat color. I can add back in whatever gradient, glossy area you might wish to see put back. Just let me know, I'll gladly revise to get this to look exactly how you want it. Thanks!
Pam

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