Hello, Thank you for entering my contest. I really like both of the logos listed here, #29, #30. You have really captured best the feel i was going for - outdoors, active, bold, adventure - and used a style that teens will like. I go back and forth between which one I like better. I like #29 because you can more easily tell that it is a compass, referencing orienteering. But then I like #30 better because it is easier to read. Can you think of a way to solve that? Also, can you maybe try deepening the fill on the PLAY as it looks a bit washed out. Lastly, love the cross, the color and placement. I would like to see if it works with a different style cross, maybe less Crusade like? This is probably the best as the style matches the look of the rest of it, but can you try?
Thanks, You are fast. that is definitely easier to read, but can we stick with the original color palate? The fill for PLAY - keep it the yellowish orange, just deeper, not red. I think the banner with Purpose Leadership etc in white is good, how about using dark brown instead of grey for background? i like the new cross style but without the white rays coming out, detracts from black action figures. Thank you, Lisa
Thank you, getting better and better! I like the brown banner with dark brown font - easy to read and color scheme works with the rest. I think it is a bit too busy/intricate though, which is why I would like to get rid of the rays coming out of the cross. And too many colors in the fill of PLAY. Can you just use one color, the deep orangish red you used in the bottom 3rd of PLAY in #42. And i like the original background in #29 and #30 - more of an apple green. Later you changed it to grass green, can you go back to the original green? thanks, Lisa
Yep, you are so close! #43 - the background is perfect, apple green and no ray lines! The only thing left to fix is the font fill on PLAY. It needs to be the same colors as the cross above. Can you try to match the orange in the cross? And it is too busy when it has stripes in it, or fade lines. Can't it be all the same color? There is just so much going on in this logo that it doesn't need any extra pzazz inside the PLAY. The busier it is, the harder it is to read.
Definitely better in a solid color! It just doesn't look like it matches the cross, too salmon. It needs to be more orange or yellow orange like the cross. Do you see what I mean, I don't want to introduce any new colors into the mix. Just the yellow, orange, brown, and green. i am trying to keep it the original color scheme from #29 - just making it more readable.
Ok, sorry to be nitpicky, but in getting feedback from others, they like the new cross better (#43) but they think it looks crooked because of that dark line on the compass star. None of the other spears on the compass star have a dark line like the one on the top, is it possible to remove that?
Yes! Perfect. I think it's perfect - good colors, easily readable, less busy - perfect adventure feel. i don't think there's anything you can do to improve this. I will just get feed back from others now... thank you for taking the time to make all the changes I asked for, appreciate it. lisa