Pivot-FitLogo Design Contest

You´re welcome dear Monica,

It's my pleasure to give you my thoughts about this.

I really like this one, and well your instinct also goes along with mine, because this one is really cool. And i really like your idea of coloring only the "f" part.

The logo is balance, simple, smart, and flexible on the usage as:
- logo horizontal, vertical, standalone and the wordmard as it´s now #148

I believe if this is your instinct you should go with it, would be mine also. The orange color is also cool, but i like more in red. And the fact of coloring the "f" make the brand shine even more at my eyes, i didn´t saw i could do that, and when you advise me to, i found that a brilliant ideia, and made me like it even more.

Comparing to the others, i also think is the best yes. I´ve put them all together in a black artboard, and my eye goes more to these ones #148, #146, #144 -- having the #148 as my favorite.

I´m not sure what can i say more, but the instinct works well as the final answer believe me.

Let me know if you need anything else Monica. Hope this help.

Kindly Regards,
João

This is it in my mind. Anything you want to comment on. I really value your opinion..

Thank you...Monica

You´re welcome dear Pivot-Fit,

Thanks for the feedback on my logos.

Yes sure i can, please check bellow my revisions and let me know what do you think:
- #144 | #145 | #146 | #147 | #148 | #149

Just let me know if you need anything else please Pivot-Fit.

Thank you.

Kindly Regards,
João

And change orange to red

And change from orange to red.

Can you take the thing over the "i" out? Thank you

Can I try the "F'only in red on this one? and take out the thing over the "i" please

Means a lot you like my work Pivot-Fit.

And i appreciate your update. Yes take the time you need do not worrie.

As always i will be around if you need me.

Thank you very much.

Kindly Regards,
João

I’m going to review everything today and make a decision. Thank you for your patience. And again. Great work. Super impressive.

Hello dear Pivot-Fit,

Thanks for the feedback.

Yes sure i can please check bellow revision:
#143

If you need anything else just let me know.

Thank you.

Kindly Regards,
João

Can you sub the other kettle bell in red for this one?

You´re welcome Pivot-Fit, i´m glad i could help. I will try to explain using the designs:

"The #58 will work as a wordmark, but you can also use the simbol on the "O" as a standalone logo (#141) , or above the lettering (vertical logo #136) on his side (horizontal logo #139). I think that gives it a great flexibility because it can work many ways, and as wordmark."

When i say wordmark, i´ve saying the logo combined with the lettering, it´s the same thing. In a wordmark we don´t have a logo above it or on his side, the logo is incorporated in the words.

Let me know if you have doubs or need anything else please.

Thank you.

Kindly regards,
João

In black and in red.

I wanted to try the red kettlebell with the "FP" in it on this one instead of the one there now.

And this paragraph you really lost me. LOL

"The #58 will work as a wordmark, but you can also use the simbol on the "O" as a standalone logo, or above the lettering (vertical logo) on his side (horizontal logo). I think that gives it a great flexibility because it can work many ways, and as wordmark."

Thank you so much! All of this is REALLY helpful.. I totally get using the "O" as a stand alone. However I have no idea what you mean by "wordmark".

Hello dear Pivot-Fit,

Thank you very much for the feedback and compliments on my work.

You´re are great to work with.

I´ve submited the variations you ask, please check and let me know what are your thoughts.

About my preference, i can be a little inbetween, because at my eyes all these look great #58 | #130 | #56

The #58 will work as a wordmark, but you can also use the simbol on the "O" as a standalone logo, or above the lettering (vertical logo) on his side (horizontal logo). I think that gives it a great flexibility because it can work many ways, and as wordmark.

About the others #130 | #56, i´m more inclined for #56 i think. The logo works also as sandalone, and as the other versions of the 1st logo, but doesn´t work as wordmark. But even so it´s a really creative design because i´ve combined the initials "PF" to create the Kettlebell.

I believe you will communicate well with all these 3 logos to your clients. What i advise is for you to go with your instinct here. I work a lot with US clients, making brands only, and usually on my meetings with them, i advise them to go with the logo they feel most comfortable and inspires them more confidence.

Put these 3 side by side on a blank word doc, or any place that you can have only white around to focus on them, and the 1st instinct you will have as your favorite one i would go with that one. Hope this help.

If you need anything else just let me know please Pivot-Fit.

Thank you.

Kindly Regards,
João

Can you put kettlebell from #58 in here?

Also I was wondering if of the ones I'm deciding between, do you have a favorite and why? I would love your input.

I'm only working on your logos. I have three of them I'm noodling. I should decide by tomorrow or Friday. But its all you.

Thank you. You are great at your craft.

Can we try this one replacing the kettlebell with the one in 130?

I mean #130!!!

Can we take out ESTD 2018 and make the kettle bell like the one in #58?

Oh sorry. I am just seeing this. No I had not asked any of them to put the Z in but the moon was cool too.

Very glad you like it dear Pivot-Fit.

Yes sure i can, please check bellow revision for your consideration and let me know if it´s all okay:
- #132

As always feel free to ask if you need anything more please.

Thank you.

Kindly Regards,
João

Can you take the dash out. It ruins the cleanness of it. Sorry.

Brilliant with the moon!!!!

Hello dear Pivot-Fit,

Thank you for all the feedback on my logo. And sorry for the delay on this one. I´m trying to understaind with admin if i can or not submit that design with the "Z". He can delay a little because of the timezone differences, i will just ask you some patience on this please. Because i´m not sure in this case if i can use it, since it will probably go against website rules, but i will let you know do not worrie.

I´ve submited revisions for the other logo and also the dash a little thicker for this one above, please check and let me know what do you think.

Also worked one with the moon on the "i": #131

If you need anything else just let me know.

Thank you.

Kindly regards,
João

Can you take out the estd 2018 and make Pivot-Fit bigger so maybe it wraps around and is more prominent?

Can you make the thing over the "i" in a "z"?

Make the dash a little thicker?

Hello dear Pivot-Fit,

Hope all is well with you.

Thank you for the great feedback.

Please check revisions bellow and let me know what do you think:
- #125 | #126 | #127

Before adding the "Z" can you just tell me please if you ask the other designer to use it, because in logotournament we can´t use other designers ideias, that´s why i wanted to check first, since if we use another designers ideias i can be removed from the contest cause site rules. Hope you understaind this.

As always i will be here if you need anything else.

Thank you very much.

Kindly Regards,
João

Minor but dots in between words make red

Can you make the thing over the "i" an "z" and a dash in between the Pivot and Fit that would represent nourishment. I don't like the apple everyone seems to use for it.

I'm sorry and add under in both red and orange.

Nutrition. Sleep. Exercise. Water.

And can you change orange to red so i can see how that looks?

I need a "-" in between Pivot and Fit.

Hi again dear Pivot Fit,

Hope you´re having a great weekend.

I´ve submited variations of the logo on black background, and also black & white versions so you can appreciate.

As always if you need anything else just let me know please, i will be around if you need.

Kindly regards,
João

Yes dear Pivot Fit. It´s makes sense for me, because it´s different and it will allow the logo wordmark to be bigger, having good readabilty at the same time.

Kindly regards,
João

You´re welcome Pivot-Fit,

I appreciate your suggestions on my logos, please check revisions bellow and let me know what do you think:
- #56 | #57 | #58 | #59

As always feel free to ask if you need anything more.

Just a quick update in case you reply and i delay, because in Portugal is late and i will sleep in a few minutes, but i will be back again tomorrow and i can work on more revisions if needed, feel free.

I will leave you my timezone bellow in case you need to check:
https://www.timeanddate.com/worldclock/portugal/porto

Thank you.

Kindly Regards,
João

Can we change to orange instead of red and make it not so round. Looks a little like a bomb. LOL

Also Can you take out the bottom black line and in orange write:
Train. Nourish. Hydrate. Rest.

That you

Can we try the "fit" upward after the T? That make sense?

You´re welcome dear Pivot-Fit,

I appreciate your great feedback on my designs.

Please check revisions bellow and let me know your thoughts:
- #53 | #54 | #55

As always feel free to ask if you need anything else.

Thank you.

Kindly Regards,
João

Can you make all pieces of "o" orange. Rotate so lines make an "X" and in each piece put NSEW (like north south east west order.

Thank you

Don't like this font but like the fit on the side. Can you try the font in #34 and the kettle bell thing you put in there but make all the pieces orange, spin it to an X and in each piece put NSEW. (like north south east west order). Then change the "fit" to orange.

You´re welcome Pivot-Fit!

Thanks for the quick updates.

Please check revisions bellow and let me know what do you think:
- #51 | #52

Feel confortable to ask if you need anything else please.

Thank you.

Kindly Regards,
João

Can you replace that leaf with something else and change the color to orange or red? Thank you!

Hello Pivot-Fit,

Hope you´re having a great day.

I´m glad you like my logo concept.

If you need changes feel free to ask please.

Your feedback is always welcome.

Thank you.

Kindly Regards,
João