#13 - liking this one. think slogan underneath could be bigger and a better font. Maybe try to come up with a better original looking symbol too (make note more a design, so it can sit by itself and you still know that is PitchSong
#12 - good idea although like the cassette idea, vinyl is also not modern enough for our company. We're going to delivering songs more than likely via MP3 and new digital formats
#14 We feel the musical note is a little clip art looking Could you try to make the musical note more original looking? We like the moving feel of the note a lot the slogan line looks good maybe try a few other font ideas and color schemes also thank you
We think the font for the SONG part needs to be a little thicker because when it is reduced it in size, it loses parts of the letters. So, we think thicken the font, (maybe?) lean both words to the right to add movement and add a little more creativity/art to the music note (like the 3D look on the Apple Mac logo), maybe a trail from it that isn't so straight. We like you logo, but feel it could be better.
#14 Our boss prefers your logo. We feel the new musical note that you did on #56 is not as good as this one, although we are still looking for improvement on this. We wish we could help you out more, as you are so close here.
I have several days left before the deadline. I will explore some other options for you on the note graphic and additional font treatments for "Song." Thank you for the opportunity to work on your project. Sincerely, Glenn Caldwell