Hi there, I really like this one too. What is you did 2 versions of this:
1- removed the bottom word PIE, kept the leaf and also made kind of a 1/2 moon pie over the top of Pie Plant, like it was rising from behind it? It would be interesting to see it sized so it wasn’t the same size or bigger than the 2 word phrase, but a bit smaller.
2- remove the word PIE at the bottom so it was just the leaf below.
Hi there, I’m not sure what happens now. I believe the Blind Time is over? So what happens now? I think I’d like to fine tune some of these designs, there are different ones that you made that I’d like to play with. We have a few days to do that? This is my first time. Can you explain it?Thanks
This is nice too. I like the solid line before Pie. Can you do 2 versions, with only one? One removing the top leaf and one removing the bottom. And keep the line on one side of the word Pie?
I still go back to this one too. What do you think about replacing the 2 lines in either side of the bottom word Pie with the rhubarb stalk on the left, and the thicker stalk flowing out in the other side of the word on the right? The line here is straight, maybe it could be a little flowy or with a curve? It could be cool.
These are getting kind of busy. I’m running out of revisions/ideas but there’s still time left on the clock and I’d like to see different options. Any possibility of going in a different direction? As the designer, do you have any ideas? I’ll indicate the styles I like. Thanks!
~Can you remove the leaf from the "i"?
~Can you remove the second word PIE and the line at the bottom?
~Can you add a stem & leaf illustration at the bottom (to replace the lines & "PIE") that can be irregular to replicate a rhubarb stem & leaf?
I'm half and half about this one. It's almost overkill. But I also like the illustrations.
~Can you remove the leaf from the "i"?
~Can you remove the second word PIE and the line at the bottom?
~Can you add a stem & leaf illustration at the bottom (to replace the lines & "PIE") that can be irregular to replicate a rhubarb stem & leaf?
I like this one too but there is something missing, or something needs to be changed a bit more.
~I like the length of the leaf. Can you make it a bit longer so it curves upwards in the circular way a little bit more so it fills in that space some?
~Can you widen the end of the stem so it resembles rhubarb more?
~Can you make the word PIE smaller?
Thanks for all your hard work! I really like this one. Do you agree that with the outline of a pie, using the word PIE at the bottom is a bit much?
Is there a way you can make the rhubarb stem a little thicker, especially at the end? If you look at a photo of rhubarb the stem is a little thicker and tapers out a bit at the end.
What if you changed this logo and did 2 slightly different versions:
Version 1 - Replaced the "Pie Plant" with the font from the bottom "Pie" and removed the bottom "Pie". Then with the bottom inner line that looks like a smiley face made that into a small not too detailed stalk of rhubarb. The leaf and also at the end of a stalk of rhubarb it gets a little wider.
Version 2 - did the same thing above with the rhubarb drawing but didn't change the font of Pie Plant and still removed the word Pie.
Looks good but missing something. Can you shorten that upper left line so (starting from left to right) the line begins just after the top side of the P and ends right after the top of the P or something like that? They, as you did in previous drawings, put a smaller not squiggly line just inside? I like that line, the inner part of a pie crust. I can be short and in between those 2 P's is kind of a triangle of a pie slice already!
Hmm, not too sure about the floating pie haha.
Maybe remove that and add the word Pie underneath with the lines, but make them shorter and squiggly like a pie crust?
And the leaf, can you make it a little bolder and smaller? Less detail?
Cool idea with the leaf. Can you replace the Pie Plant font here with the original font (but keep this bottom Pie font, I like it).
Can you remove the outer squiggly line on the left and make the inner line the squiggly one?
Hi there, can you replace the leaf with a leaf that's just a little more like a rhubarb leaf, not too big though? I kind of like the idea of the dot being the leaf and the "i" already looks like the stem.
Can you take out the pie and replace it with a small slice of pie, just a basic outline? It can look like it's pointing inwards.
This is nice. Can you do this in other fonts so I can see what they look like? I will probably make a rubber stamp for my pie boxes and the outline of the pie will have to be black.
Can you take a look at a new attachment I just uploaded and see if you can do a small framing around the upper left hand side with a pie slice outline. Maybe at the bottom right the same but with a little something to represent rhubarb?
Can we make the second word "Pie" smaller and/or a different font?
Take out the plant and incorporate into the border of the pie crust. Make the pie crust a little more integrated into being a partial border, it's kind of lost. It doesn't really have to be circling all the way around.
I refined my description a little, if you want to go back and read, it might help you understand what I'm thinking more.
Can you make the edge of the pie illustration crimped, like the outside of a crimped pie? This looks more like bread. Can it frame the words somehow, partially, and not all the way around? I think the rhubarb plant should go, it's out of place.
This is kind of cool. I like the lines and different font at the bottom. I think the graphic makes this a bit high. I'd like to see the graphic integrated into the words more. Can you take partial elements of the graphic and add them in? Maybe just the leaf?
Can you
I don't care for the image of the pie, it's very generic and doesn't go with what I'm trying to convey.
Can you take it away and try a few Pie Plant in this format in other fonts? It should be bold and rustic.
Also do a few in Pie Plant Pie?
Thanks,
Good morning.
Could you remove the inner circle on the pie and make it a little more free-form and stack the words?
Also, can you combine the ruffles on the rhubarb with the pie outline somehow?
Could you do a few other fonts?
I like the leaf over the "i" actually. Would you be able to put Pie over the word Plant? Can you use the bolder curvy line in the pie off to one side of the words as an outline in bold?
There's way too much happening here. I like the font. The pie is out of place, I'd like to see perhaps a partial outline of the pie and also a partial outline of a leaf of the rhubarb. Could you put Pie above Plant? And maybe try Pie Plant Pie?
Thanks for your submission.
I'm concerned that the color in the logo will be expensive to reproduce if I just want to do b&w.
I don't think this translates pie, can a sillouette of a pie be incorporated too?
I'd like to see the font more fluid and not so horizontal.
I attached a few examples of painting I liked as inspiration.
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1- removed the bottom word PIE, kept the leaf and also made kind of a 1/2 moon pie over the top of Pie Plant, like it was rising from behind it? It would be interesting to see it sized so it wasn’t the same size or bigger than the 2 word phrase, but a bit smaller.
2- remove the word PIE at the bottom so it was just the leaf below.
Thanks!
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~Can you remove the second word PIE and the line at the bottom?
~Can you add a stem & leaf illustration at the bottom (to replace the lines & "PIE") that can be irregular to replicate a rhubarb stem & leaf?
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~Can you remove the leaf from the "i"?
~Can you remove the second word PIE and the line at the bottom?
~Can you add a stem & leaf illustration at the bottom (to replace the lines & "PIE") that can be irregular to replicate a rhubarb stem & leaf?
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~I like the length of the leaf. Can you make it a bit longer so it curves upwards in the circular way a little bit more so it fills in that space some?
~Can you widen the end of the stem so it resembles rhubarb more?
~Can you make the word PIE smaller?
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Is there a way you can make the rhubarb stem a little thicker, especially at the end? If you look at a photo of rhubarb the stem is a little thicker and tapers out a bit at the end.
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Version 1 - Replaced the "Pie Plant" with the font from the bottom "Pie" and removed the bottom "Pie". Then with the bottom inner line that looks like a smiley face made that into a small not too detailed stalk of rhubarb. The leaf and also at the end of a stalk of rhubarb it gets a little wider.
Version 2 - did the same thing above with the rhubarb drawing but didn't change the font of Pie Plant and still removed the word Pie.
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Maybe remove that and add the word Pie underneath with the lines, but make them shorter and squiggly like a pie crust?
And the leaf, can you make it a little bolder and smaller? Less detail?
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Can you remove the outer squiggly line on the left and make the inner line the squiggly one?
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Can you take out the pie and replace it with a small slice of pie, just a basic outline? It can look like it's pointing inwards.
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Can you take a look at a new attachment I just uploaded and see if you can do a small framing around the upper left hand side with a pie slice outline. Maybe at the bottom right the same but with a little something to represent rhubarb?
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Take out the plant and incorporate into the border of the pie crust. Make the pie crust a little more integrated into being a partial border, it's kind of lost. It doesn't really have to be circling all the way around.
I refined my description a little, if you want to go back and read, it might help you understand what I'm thinking more.
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Can you take it away and try a few Pie Plant in this format in other fonts? It should be bold and rustic.
Also do a few in Pie Plant Pie?
Thanks,
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Could you remove the inner circle on the pie and make it a little more free-form and stack the words?
Also, can you combine the ruffles on the rhubarb with the pie outline somehow?
Could you do a few other fonts?
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Worried that the plant has too much detail.
I'm looking for more simple and a bit more rustic.
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I'm concerned that the color in the logo will be expensive to reproduce if I just want to do b&w.
I don't think this translates pie, can a sillouette of a pie be incorporated too?
I'd like to see the font more fluid and not so horizontal.
I attached a few examples of painting I liked as inspiration.