Photo Safari NetworkLogo Design Contest

I wanted to play on the safari idea using different patterns to symbolize the different entities with a common purpose.
Feedback is always welcome

(This comment references Entry #5)

Hey, Sahmmy! Thanks fo rthe entry! We really like the creativity of this one, but still feel that Lass' looks a little more expensive/sophisticated which is why it is still ranked #1. She still hasn't responded to our critique, however, so this ranking could definitely change!! Thanks so much for your entry; we really do like it and would like it even more if we could bump it up a little with the expensive feel! Thanks!

Thank you for the feedback. I'm uploading a couple variations.

(This comment references Entry #15)

Thanks, Sahmmy! Could you try the following to see how it works?

#15:
Make the aperture O you've created large
Put Photo Safari Network in the middle of this new opening you just created (Photo on line 1, Safari on line 2, Network on line 3)
Can lines 1-3 be justified (which I assume means you need to spread the photo letters out a little and reduce the size of the word network)?

Thanks so much!!

Thanks again for the feedback. Uploading a couple versions.

(This comment references Entry #33)