I really like this concept! Can I see different variations of it? What I'm looking for is a logo in which I can put easily on a T-Shirt, Website, and Banner.
As far as the T-Shirt goes, I would like a logo that I can put something small on the front breast and than Personal Training by Dan Melita on the back.
Again Great concept though!
I'd love to see what else you can do with this feedback!
Entry #74 Has moved into the number #2 spot on the rankings. I like the multiple people aspect a lot. Another few things that might help take over the #1 ranking are:
1. Logos with some type of shine are getting better reviews from my clients 2. I'm trying to convey being elite and professional in the logo so maybe playing around with color variations would work 3. My target audience is upper-middle to upper class so think luxury 4. Overall health is main focus as far as what my company does.
Hope this feedback helps you and I can't wait to see what you can do with it! You're a very talented designer and I'm glad you decided to join my contest!
Hi! Thanks for comments they are really clear about what you are looking for, maybe a change in typography will help. I´ll work on it and submit another entry. Thanks again!