that last comment was for entry #33. For entry #31 I am going to try to explain something....
The way you have the splash at the top can you have the circular part of the splash form the O in personal - using the same font. Leave "competition swimwear" under it Then maybe have a swimmer diving into the splash....
Does that make sense? is that too much to ask? I really really love the work you are doing!
I love #44!!!! - Can you change the coloring of the swimmer? it is a little too dark. Also can you remove the orange suit - having a suit on forces the image to be male leaving the suit off leaves it ambiguous.
I love the work you are doing on this! I know you are busy with work (like you said) so take your time!
#46 the colors are Reflex Blue and Cyan and Warm Red - happy to try any other adjustments and hope you continue to prefer my design through all the good competition! Happy Thanksgiving!
Ok so #44 is back to our top choice 2 easy changes to make to the design (after talking to our sales rep form speedo) he would like us to say "swim shop" instead of "competitive swimwear" and can you remove the brief (the orange suit) from the swimmer diving in. Sorry to change from #46 but we liked the darker colors better. So if you can make those 2 changes on #44 that should be it! Thanks!
So you are by far my favorite design but ultimately is has to be a family choice because it is a family business.
Can we see a couple changes. On Entry #73 and #33 - we are still not sure if we like the swimmer from the O or if we like it from in front (that is why they keep moving around). We like the coloring on #73 (#33 would need to say "swim shop").
The changes we are looking for on #73 can the "o" part that is part of the splash be a little adjusted? My mom thinks it is a little hard to read with the "o" being the actual splash but I like the way it works so much into the logo. Does that make sense? Even if you just change the shape of the current "o" a little bit or maybe make it the color of the rest of the words.
In #33 and #73 my mom and dad (who own the business) think the splash looks a little like a turkey tail, I do not but they pay the bills! Can you play with that a little bit? Thanks so much for all your help.
i will try these changes for you hope i understand at a bit of a disadvantage just now as i broke my arm yesterday...but can still do the program. even if it goes into judging time adjustments can be made on the top ranked design.
I should have said this before - I always want "swim shop" in that bold orange you used in entry #91 - and the splash my mom wants to see changed is the actual splash at the top. I love what you did with the "o" in 91 - just change the swim shop to orange in #92 and play with the splash a little at the top.
changes requested. happy to adjust more but leaving from so cal to no cal in a few hours. we do provide additional formats including black & white, pdf, and different elements of the logo separately for complete use. we will also provide information on pms color numbers and fonts. remember adjustments can still be made during judging period. thanks
#106 looks great - the last change can you make "swim shop" a little bigger... do not move the swimmer just make that word a little larger. Splash looks awesome!
on #97 use the splash from #106 - make the P and the B capitol and make "swim Shop" a little bigger there. then that should be all the changes. I promise!
ALL CAPS - two different fonts as the original font doesnt have all caps - my hand surgery is Thursday would be good to finalize this before then if possible
So you are our winner - my dad just wants to see one more font change. He is looking for something more like the font in entry #103 (I know this is not your work). I again do not agree with my dad on this but... they do pay all the bills!!! Sorry to keep bothering you!